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Ignorance is Bliss, Im Told by ~MashedTaters90:iconMashedTaters90:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Spoken Word


I glimpse you every now an again
Waltzing past my view,
Leaning my way.
Breezing that smile.

Whispering our tale,
Slowly revealing that veil,
Dark feeling untold
Edging to the brink.
©2008-2010 ~MashedTaters90
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:iconkryptothedolphin:
~Kryptothedolphin Jul 3, 2008, 4:38:53 AM
That's a nice short poem :heart: I never knew you wrote poetry =}

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:lick: I :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: CHERRIES!!!! :dance: :w00t: :heart:

::I believe in Jesus Christ, my Lord and Savior::
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~MorganCooper Jul 3, 2008, 7:31:13 AM
I have to agree with Jinx; it's a really nice poem, Tash. I think that the fact tat it's short also adds to the blunt feelings within it.

Wonderful job, hon.

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Jesus Christ died for me, and in Him will I forevermore be in debt; blessed is His glorious name! ◕‿◕

"But tomorrow may rain, so I'll follow the sun." - The Beatles
:iconmashedtaters90:
~MashedTaters90 Jul 4, 2008, 12:44:32 PM
Thanks. : ) Yeah I kinda wrote it outta the ironicalness of someone you once knew.

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Need some inspiration. Not another Negotiation.

"Half the worry in the world is caused by people trying to make decisions before they have sufficient knowledge on which to base a decision."
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~MashedTaters90 Jul 4, 2008, 12:45:21 PM
^^ Thankyou, I write ALOT. mmhmm, : )

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Need some inspiration. Not another Negotiation.

"Half the worry in the world is caused by people trying to make decisions before they have sufficient knowledge on which to base a decision."
:iconkryptothedolphin:
~Kryptothedolphin Jul 4, 2008, 1:12:28 PM
You're welcome =D

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:lick: I :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: CHERRIES!!!! :dance: :w00t: :heart:

::I believe in Jesus Christ, my Lord and Savior::
:iconmorgancooper:
~MorganCooper Jul 4, 2008, 3:44:44 PM
You're welcome!

And, someone I once knew? :O_o: Hmm, who might that be?

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Jesus Christ died for me, and in Him will I forevermore be in debt; blessed is His glorious name! ◕‿◕

"But tomorrow may rain, so I'll follow the sun." - The Beatles
:iconmashedtaters90:
~MashedTaters90 Jul 5, 2008, 7:23:43 PM
Aye, I'd rather not say.... T-T but Its over now.

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Need some inspiration. Not another Negotiation.

"Half the worry in the world is caused by people trying to make decisions before they have sufficient knowledge on which to base a decision."
:iconmorgancooper:
~MorganCooper Jul 5, 2008, 9:00:04 PM
Ahh, I see. ^^

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Jesus Christ died for me, and in Him will I forevermore be in debt; blessed is His glorious name! ◕‿◕

"But tomorrow may rain, so I'll follow the sun." - The Beatles
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~leahwest4 Jul 25, 2008, 12:37:29 PM
very nice write hon! :hug:

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Life is all about experience...
Experience is all about pleasure and pain,
And pleasure and pain are controled by the mind.
When it is said that I live in my own little world...
I heartily agree.
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